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Truth Vs Lies
Contributed by
fallen_eyes
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Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 10:26:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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At night I seem to wonder
if the choice i made was right
I watch you standing infront of me
saying you love me, holding me close
But is this true or just painful lies?
Alone i sit and think to myself
Did you really want me back
I see you talk to her not me
Am I the one you really need
Do i see your hidden feelings?
On my bed I remember times
you kissed my lips, my neck, my chest
you felt me like no one before
and yet I see a distance gaze
is it for me or someone else
In your car I sit and think
Is it me you really need
you say you love me you really do
is just my body that works good with you
hidden secrets are coming true
so tell me now should i love you?
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2004-01-15 10:26:54]
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Re: Truth Vs Lies
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 10:58:46 AM AEST
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Trust is such a painful thing to have once broken
A very heartfelt poem
Wonderfully expressed straight from your heart
Very moving
Wonderful
Hope all works out well for you hun
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: Truth Vs Lies
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by forever_lonely on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 12:37:40 PM AEST
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Hey hun
This is a tough one to comment on.. and i know it must have been tougher to write
The poem itself is amazing, your really going through some confusing times hun and trust is something that you cant just get back.. he has to earn back... as you know...
theres only one person that can tell you if you should love him... shes that pretty thing in your reflection:)
All the best hun, let me know what your reflection says ok
Luke |
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Re: Truth Vs Lies
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 05:12:33 AM AEST
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So much pain and conflict. The last line was really powerful, brought the whole thing together nicely. It's always best to follow your heart, even though it sometimes leads you astray.
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: Truth Vs Lies
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 03:13:14 PM AEST
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| I wanted to point out a couple of lines I thought were good. Hell they are all awesome. I should just copy and paste your poem here. It was wonderful. I've asked that question myself... This really made it come rushing back... It was wonderful. Great write. Follow your heart. Follow your instincts. If they conflict weigh each thing out. |
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