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Love spell warning
Contributed by
sweetangeluk
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Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 10:01:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
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If we had to choose a love partner who would it be
If one spell was granted to you who? if a guarantee
Would it be your beloved who you were with today
Or that man or woman who lives many miles away
You would not be able to change this woman or man
Take them back and love them just as it began
If we had that wish come true would we feel bliss
No thoughts of a love with memories to reminisce
Be careful who you wish for cause the spell cant be broken
Your words cannot be undone they cannot be unspoken
I wonder if we would be truly happy with our love dream
Would love cascade like a waterfall gently in to a stream
So tonight before you go to sleep say dust from the genies lamp
Straw from the field of dreams and an angel's postage stamp
A fairy's giggle and a bucket full of charm send my love to thee
Just make sure they give me all their love and not hepatitis b
Love Angelxxxxxxxx
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sweetangeluk
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2004-01-15 10:01:28]
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Re: Love spell warning
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by fallen_eyes on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 11:21:30 AM AEST
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lol i do agree the twist is rather grand! I thought the poem was really good and the little giggle at the end just gives it an extra kick
Tammy x |
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Re: Love spell warning
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by CrucifiedAndLeft2Die on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 01:24:24 PM AEST
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| very nice write... |
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Re: Love spell warning
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 05:27:46 PM AEST
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| Aww, I have to say with the greatest respect that I didn't really like the twist at the end ... I was enjoying this poem so much - it's extremely well written, has a great theme - in fact, your words are so true "i wonder if we would be truly happy with our love dream" ... makes you think carefully. Anyway, it's a great write ... I enjoyed it a lot ... just would have liked a different ending - hope you don't mind me saying that :)) ... Jan |
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Re: Love spell warning
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by MissLee on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 06:25:10 PM AEST
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| Awww girly you make me LAUGH..have not done that in ages.... thanks..great write by the way. |
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Re: Love spell warning
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 03:10:22 PM AEST
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| Lol. I like how you just slipped it in there too... Nice write. I enjoyed it very much. |
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