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It Feels Good To Be Bad
Contributed by
Fiona
on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 07:30:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Blood on my fingertips
I smile at the cuts
I’ve left etched on my arm
It feels…
Good
It feels so good
To be bad
As I skip another meal
And the meal after that
Cause it feels…
So good
It feels so good to be bad
I’ll try this drug
And that drug
And maybe some of that…
Because it feels good
It feels so good to be bad
I’ll sleep with Him,
And then Her
And then both of them
And I’ll drink
And I’ll fight
And I’ll cheat
And I’ll lie…
All to feel good
And its not like I care
Cause it feels so damn good
To be bad
Copyright ©
Fiona
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2004-01-15 07:30:39]
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Re: It Feels Good To Be Bad
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by garyh on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 07:39:59 AM AEST
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wow very nice :D :D :D but umm freaky hehe
i can be that guy? hmm *cough* haha |
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Re: It Feels Good To Be Bad
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by ArdRi79 on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 08:00:26 AM AEST
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Bittersweet,
subject matter aside the and i'll...and i'll...parts work well to show the bad things building up , till it seems u cant go back
It made a point, was entertaining and didn't ramble, thanks for sharing and well written.
im looking forward to reading more. |
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Re: It Feels Good To Be Bad
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by CrucifiedAndLeft2Die on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 08:19:54 AM AEST
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| i don't think your getting rusty-- nice write |
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Re: It Feels Good To Be Bad
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by Necromant on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 03:51:20 PM AEST
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Gosh! Wow a poem! Hmmm your words are so realistic, well yes sometimes it feel good to be bad but not always.....personal expierance. Continue writing! I liked this one!
Anne :D |
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Re: It Feels Good To Be Bad
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 02:19:51 PM AEST
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| I think you're not that rusty. If this is you rusty I can't wait to see once you get dusted off. Very nice write. Loved it. |
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