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Exit
Contributed by
Adreana
on
Sunday, 1st September 2002 @ 05:36:21 PM in AEST
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So I broke the deal
I tied my hands behind my back
Yes, my own hands
And I'm sorry but it's done
The fumes you throw toward me
Are choking me, suffocating me
Just help me with this noose
I can't end this by myself
Happiness next exit
To get off here
Or not to get off here
That is the question
Purple stars beaming here all around
Diamond colored moon nowhere to be found
Part these pewter clouds to free me
Hide the thick blue waters from my view
Happiness next exit
To get off here
Or not to get off here
That is the question
The strobe lights hurt my fading eyes
But I can still see you face as clear as day
Just hold me closer now and forever
Tell me it'll all be over soon
Happiness next exit
To get off here
Or not to get off here
That is the question
Just le me breathe
Just for a moment
Let me breathe
Till my air is gone.
Copyright ©
Adreana
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Re: Exit
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by papajfat on
Monday, 2nd September 2002 @ 09:11:09 AM AEST
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this is a great song, i can almost hear it
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Re: Exit
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Tuesday, 3rd September 2002 @ 04:35:02 AM AEST
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| great write... pewter clouds and diamond moon... good discriptive writting. I like this piece and think it will make a great song. |
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Re: Exit
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by Terry_Stephen_Driscoll on
Wednesday, 4th September 2002 @ 07:57:50 AM AEST
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Adreana - this is great stuff - super language - I would love to hear a melody attached to this.
Love Terry
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