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Gone
Contributed by
star_sapphire
on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 05:58:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I remember those memories we share
Those times when you were still there
Wishing I have said what I already feel
Thinking that you will always be there
I hace wasted so much of my time
Now, I can't believe it's for real.
You were gone and Im so alone
Whispering my feelings in a cold stone
Its all been said yet undone
Wishing I had said it before you were gone.
As your presence slowly fades away
My heart was broken into pieces.
I want to feel your love, but I feel numb
I want to weep but shed no tears
I want to feel warm but it is cold
Maybe this is what I must misunderstand,
To face whatever lies ahead, fall and learn to stand.
And to move on, without you.
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2004-01-15 05:58:50]
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Re: Gone
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by garyh on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 07:52:42 AM AEST
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| very nicely said.. |
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Re: Gone
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 08:11:42 AM AEST
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Wondefully expressed
Brilliant poem i liked this one
Well done
Love Angelxxxx |
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Re: Gone
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by whisper-of-night on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 09:13:52 AM AEST
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Lovely poem..... we sometimes just take what we once had for granted, and only regret it afterward, but it is wise of you though- 'To face whatever lies ahead, fall and learn to stand. And to move on, without you.' Good stuff, waiting to see more.^_^
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Re: Gone
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 01:33:20 PM AEST
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| Pretty good write. Has a very deep sadness to it. I liked. |
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