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Next Time, a Sandwich
Contributed by
puppy_dog_eyes
on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 04:53:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
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A tin on a shelf, innocent enough
Or so it seems, no cause to doubt
Nothing written on the label, No "Warning,demon lurks"
No protective clothes required for this simple task
Reaching up, I select you
Ignoring the bold red design painted on your shell
The colour of danger, though I read "Tomato Soup"
As I reach for the opener lurking in the drawer
Tastebuds tingling, not too long to wait
Simmer gently in the pan, serve with a pinch of herb
Cutting the circle, breaking your seal
Already imagining the warm delicious taste
I let out a cry as you bite me deep
Victim to a razor sharp tooth
Is this a game where you just changed the rules ?
I expose the inner you, you the inner me
Ok, you win, I am bleeding now
I surrender, look what you have done
Tomato soup ?, I think you are more than that
Liquid evil, I curse you !!
I look at the orangey red of you, the darker red of me
I want to crush you for revenge, I would if not for pain
No more risking danger just for a daily meal
Safety first to be the rule, for me next time......a sandwich
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Re: Next Time, a Sandwich
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by Aika on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 05:25:55 AM AEST
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This kind of humour suits you perfectly..
Really wonderful writing, STEVE!!!!
Love, aika:-) |
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Re: Next Time, a Sandwich
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by CrucifiedAndLeft2Die on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 08:28:44 AM AEST
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| lol this was great...hehehe |
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Re: Next Time, a Sandwich
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by whisper-of-night on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 09:43:15 AM AEST
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| Hahaha, great sense of humour! I was a bit down after read few sad poems, but this? Haha, I am happy all over again! Thanks! |
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Re: Next Time, a Sandwich
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 02:06:18 PM AEST
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Thank you, Steve, for sharing this incident in such a lovely way. I enjoyed it very much..
Thanks also for your sweet comment on my poem.
Jenni |
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Re: Next Time, a Sandwich
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 01:29:00 PM AEST
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| Oh lord that was funny! I liked this. It was just wonderful. |
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