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My Crimson Dreams
Contributed by
frayedends
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Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 01:02:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Spilling down my crimson dreams
sitting down silently--mind wandering,
make no mistake as my thoughts,
flying like butterflies,suck the warm nector
leaving me anaemic--senses weaken
too indolent to wipe clean the stains.
And then a face,a memory trace
a sudden lightning dispells the darkness
and the momentary flash shows me
the dream more beautiful than reality
as your prescence--like an alchemist
turm my crimson dreams to roses
and i smile like as i smell your scent
do i look like a happy child?
Hide me in your soothing warmth
melting my icebergs and the frozen butterflies
fly away--leaving me in peace.
and in this peace, i close my eyes
I will wake up again,i hope
hanging onto your faith in me
and my crimson dreams
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frayedends
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2004-01-15 01:02:33]
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Re: My Crimson Dreams
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by whisper-of-night on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 09:57:07 AM AEST
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| Most times when I read love& romance poems, they would left me felt sad or unwanted, but soemhow this one..... this one..... mmmm..... make my heart feel really warm, beautiful work....... |
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Re: My Crimson Dreams
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 11:17:11 AM AEST
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Soul piercing
The words went straight to my heart
Truly beautiful one of the best poems I have read
Get it published great work
Breathtaking Seriously brill
My kind of poem
Love Angelxx |
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Re: My Crimson Dreams
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 12:31:14 PM AEST
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| I liked this. It was different yet rather good. |
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