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You and me
Contributed by
cryingonmyporch
on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 11:21:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Love me not.
For I am the unloveable,
untouchable,
the undeserving.
Lie to me.
For I am the ignorant,
the one who loves you,
the one who wants forever with you.
Punish me.
For I am the innocent,
the victim,
the one's who love blinds all.
Crush my dreams.
For they are only dreams,
I am undeserving,
of believing I'm free.
Tame my soul.
For I am a wild child,
the uncontrolable,
and at times unbareable.
Shatter my heart.
For It is already cracking,
YOU PROMISED,
but lied,
which really shouldn't surprise me.
Tear me to pieces.
For you are the reason that I'm tearing my self apart.
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cryingonmyporch
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2004-01-14 23:21:37]
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Re: You and me
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 12:21:44 AM AEST
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The poem left me wanting to cross my fingers to keep the "vampire" back! Ack!
Seriously, though, good communication of emotion, really nice structure. Good read! |
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Re: You and me
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 11:11:59 AM AEST
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You will I hope attract the right man one day
Great poem very well expressed
Dont settle for second best when you can have the best
love Angelxxx |
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Re: You and me
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 10:52:59 AM AEST
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| Wow... This was a good write. Yeah... Maybe it's time to learn from your mistakes.... Stop dating little boys. Nice job. |
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