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For Life Is Sweet For Certain
Contributed by
Exodus-On-Life
on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 11:11:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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We climbed far to high for redemption
Your smile captured my eyes and stole them from me
We would celebrate and dance upon the clouds
Close my mouth, not to spoil you with words
These days continue with things we can never change
I long to come to you at last
Feeling upon the wall for direction
You shined into my life with light
Fixed these broken hinges with compassion and correction...
You can open me up and look inside my mind...
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2004-01-14 23:11:12] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: For Life Is Sweet For Certain
(User Rating: 1 ) by PumpkinPie on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 11:52:36 PM AEST (User
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Nice work ! I liked it !
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Re: For Life Is Sweet For Certain
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 08:43:37 PM AEST (User
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love this, love the vivid expressive feelings within' hugs n' love nessa |
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