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A Lady's Realization

Contributed by Angelic_Demon on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 10:14:02 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems




She sat in class one day,
Bored to death by the teacher's droning,
About ancient people and their ancient way,
All of that time thinking what else she could be doing.

Extremely religious Goths in the Middle Ages?
Wasn't there more to just that, in her Humanities class?
More than architecture and Catholics? She was getting tired of the pages.
Why did it seem like something she could not impasse?

Finally he let the students to themselves.
She sighed in relief, having been glaring.
She wondered if she could write a story about elves.
A girl behind her was talking, raring.

About what she didn't know.
She just sat there and read.
She talked with her friends about their God, aglow.
They tried to get her to talk, but she'd rather live in a shed.

See, she thought that she believed like they did.
But oh, how wrong she was.
They didn't know that she did chide.
They questioned her faith, asking her why, and she said "just because."

Did they know that they were doing her a favor?
Turning her away from what she was never comfortable with?
A religion that made no sense, and that it was something that would not make her waiver?
She never imagined that she'd become a witch.




Copyright © Angelic_Demon ... [ 2004-01-14 22:14:02]
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Re: A Lady's Realization (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 11:05:03 PM AEST
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I like it... though you make the idea of being a witch sound so ominous. Other than that, great write!

~ Dee


Re: A Lady's Realization (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 11:38:21 AM AEST
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i never appreciated anyone trying to force me to believe as they did either, and it made me stronger in my own beliefs:) hugs n' love, mom xx


Re: A Lady's Realization (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Saturday, 17th January 2004 @ 08:44:42 PM AEST
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Mara, charming write, believe in yourself, those that turn you one way are usually not there with you throughout your life, take care Val


Re: A Lady's Realization (User Rating: 1 )
by driping_blood on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 12:56:41 AM AEST
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r u really a pagon (witch)
whatever you what to call it

dont let anyone change your mind lol
its good how u can stand against the crowd

-driping_blood-
ya i know its spelled wrong but o-well


Re: A Lady's Realization (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 10:34:32 AM AEST
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If your friends try to convert you start speaking in tongues and spitting at everything... It seems to work pretty well. Lol. Sorry. Very good write. I liked how you ended it. I also liked the parts about the teacher letting you be free of their incessant ramblings.




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