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A Bad Seed
Contributed by
vampy
on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 10:06:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Lost in the world
with no direction
or chance.
False hopes keep alive,
the fire burning brightly.
The ditzy-ness of your tongue
fails to provide
any glimmer of intelligence,
but over-excels in promoting
your ignorance.
Blinded by the times,
blinded by cliches,
all your adventures
and risky experimentations
are an imitation of the past.
Doing what "should" be done,
keeping up with expectations
of your generation.
Using "fun" as an excuse,
condemning those who do not partake.
Morals, values,
they cease to matter,
cease to exist.
Your fun will only lead
to regrets and dangers,
a danger you know,
but fail to care about.
Copyright ©
vampy
... [
2004-01-14 22:06:29]
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Re: A Bad Seed
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 10:31:39 PM AEST
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Good write..
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Re: A Bad Seed
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 10:32:01 PM AEST
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Very good write.
Shows wisdom and creativity.
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: A Bad Seed
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by sheilasin on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 12:09:14 AM AEST
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| Do I know him?Sounds like most of my boyfriends. |
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Re: A Bad Seed
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 10:30:07 AM AEST
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| Very good write. You almost have an angry tone here. Unless it is an angry tone. I liked this one as well. Try to not be so serious about life. It is meant to be enjoyed. |
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Re: A Bad Seed
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by XxNights_ChildxX on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 07:07:26 PM AEST
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| This poem is very good, it makes one-self think about making right and wrong decisions in life, very good! |
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Re: A Bad Seed
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by JacobsKK on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 08:06:58 PM AEST
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| Very Creative |
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Re: A Bad Seed
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by candysears on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 07:41:52 PM AEST
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Very good write..
God Bless! |
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Re: A Bad Seed
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by 3660Days on
Wednesday, 24th December 2008 @ 07:06:20 AM AEST
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| That is the truest thing I have read all day. |
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Re: A Bad Seed
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by Sheveg on
Sunday, 27th June 2010 @ 12:37:15 PM AEST
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Sad. I hope things are better now.
Sherry |
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Re: A Bad Seed
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by shereal_14 on
Wednesday, 7th July 2010 @ 07:55:25 PM AEST
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| You've got talent |
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Re: A Bad Seed
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by Alphas0z on
Tuesday, 8th February 2011 @ 10:54:30 AM AEST
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It describes teenagers of modern time.
We speak all sorts of things and who doesn't do the same we condomn them to exile.
We know the dangers but we ignore them.
Your poem has a meaning.
It's beautiful. |
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