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Failed Attempts
Contributed by
monkey
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Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 09:58:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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your worthless attempts
to apologize
forever fail
never again
can i trust you
because everytime, you betray
I dont hate you
I just refuse
to be friends with you
eight years of friendship
shattered;
like fragile grass
I'll be honest with you
although
you never were with me
I dont miss you
a bit
its like you were never there
like a job
you were fired
and replaced
one day
you'll realize
your huge mistake
you'll sit alone
while I am surrounded
by loyal friends
Copyright ©
monkey
... [
2004-01-14 21:58:35]
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Re: Failed Attempts
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 10:02:03 PM AEST
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Very well said.
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Failed Attempts
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by whisper-of-night on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 09:22:39 PM AEST
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| I had been betrayed by my very best friend before, so I understand how you feels; But just remember, there are no point stress youself over someone not worth it, you might as well enjoy the other good things while you can! Don't let her spoil your mood! |
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Re: Failed Attempts
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 10:26:20 AM AEST
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| Nice show of emotion. I like how it felt angry and slightly hurt. Even resentful. I like the idea of the ending. Sometimes you gotta cut loose the bad in your life and keep the good. Nice write. |
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