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Toxic Waste
Contributed by
monkey
on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 09:52:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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green,
bubbling
liquid
in an open jar
smells
garbage-like
and makes me sick
I look
at the label
on the toxic waste
it reads
"love"
Copyright ©
monkey
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2004-01-14 21:52:39]
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Re: Toxic Waste
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 12:43:11 AM AEST
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| That "venom" comes from the word 'Venus' points out how terrible love and affection can be when they go bad. |
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Re: Toxic Waste
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 10:24:53 AM AEST
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I think humorous poetry would have worked as well. I like the wording to this one. Just me but I think opening it with
'in a
dream
I see a'
Dunno just me. I liked it though. |
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