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The Dance

Contributed by demon on Sunday, 1st September 2002 @ 05:33:11 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

We were dancing in the garden
looking into your eyes,holding you close
a priceless feeling,an endless beauty.
Amongst the tulips and the roses
....We danced....
I looked at you,you looked at me
a beautiful night under the stars we chose
to be together is such serenity.
Amongst the tulips and the roses
....We danced....
We blocked out bad thoughts
enemies,friends or foes
this time it was just about you and I.
Amongst the tulips and the roses
....We danced....
You twirled around,my heart skipping a beat
you twirled up high on your toes
times like this heard no goodbyes.
Amongst the tulips and the roses
....We danced....
There was no hurt,no sadness
no tears of pain nor sorrow
although tears of joy,plenty of.
Amongst the tulips and the roses
....We danced....
The way we looked didnt seem to matter
our hair a mess and casual clothes
for love has no requirements.
Amongst the tulips and the roses
....We danced....
To our right, a pond of fish
where a water fountain silently flows
the sky deep blue,the sun bright yellow.
Amongst the tulips and the roses
....We danced....
What I feel for you,I cannot put into words
a love like this nobody knows
If only I could capture this moment.
Amongst the tulips and the roses
....We danced....
You leaned forward and gave a smile
I kissed the tip of your nose
I kissed your forhead and gave a smile.
Amongst the tulips and the roses
....We danced....
The short time that you have been with me..
seems like eternity,through highs and lows
Oh what a feeling this is to feel.
Amongst the tulips and the roses
....We danced....

I paused to look around
for being real,this did not seem
and as the night soon ended
I stopped to only realise..
I was dancing with you in my dreams.

Copyright © demon ... [ 2002-09-01 17:33:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Dance (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 1st September 2002 @ 07:05:14 PM AEST
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This is really sweet.Very Nicely writen,It's a beautiful dream and i hope it all comes true for you one day.I like the way you started it out by night and then by the end the sun was shining and the sky was blue,gave me the impression as if it was a dream that felt like forever.

The future belongs to the ones who believe in the beauty of their dreams.

-RJM

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