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Lock and key
Contributed by
forever_lonely
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Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 09:32:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Eternal temptress swallows me
Her beauty unmasked immortally
Darkness swarms graceful light
Shadows fall like silent night
Screams of wraith plague like sin
Thoughts of massacres simmer within
Twisted emotion lost in capture
Reminiscent love slow to rapture
Entrapped within my soul now lost
Desires were my only cost
Locked away I’m soon to be
Sanity my lock and key
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Re: Lock and key
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 09:44:28 PM AEST
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interesting ...well done
Shari |
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Re: Lock and key
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 09:58:56 PM AEST
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Very creative, direct and to the point.
Great work!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Lock and key
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 10:04:49 PM AEST
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| Excellent write ... rhyme, rhythm and interesting words ... Jan |
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Re: Lock and key
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by CrucifiedAndLeft2Die on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 10:08:11 PM AEST
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Morbid ironic beauty
very well written, very well put together, and with very strong emotions
I loved it |
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Re: Lock and key
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 11:14:07 PM AEST
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Definitely one of your finest. Love the descriptions, great rhythm, too. Even the title drew me in. Well done, my friend.
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: Lock and key
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 03:08:03 AM AEST
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| Great poem!! |
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Re: Lock and key
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by Necromant on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 07:14:36 AM AEST
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Wow!! This is definitely one of your bests. Such strong words and dark ones too, I love this poem! You're very talented! Continue writing!
Anne ;) |
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Re: Lock and key
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by Empty_Soul on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 08:38:21 AM AEST
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Hey dude, i'm really not too sure what to put about this one, i had to read it few times to absorb it all. This is one again a truely wonderful poem by you, as always, if not one of your best.
"Twisted emotion lost in capture
Reminiscent love slow to rapture
Entrapped within my soul now lost
Desires were my only cost"
Love those few lines, indeed this is true in many unfortunate case in out lives, especially mine as you know! keep up the amazing writes!
John |
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Re: Lock and key
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 08:19:28 PM AEST
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| you really went into the depths of darkness, love it:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Lock and key
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by fallen_eyes on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 09:10:45 AM AEST
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| its got fab flow, love the words! its really catchy i thought i'd ready it just cuz title sounded intriging! it very cool poem. luv ya always T xx |
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Re: Lock and key
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 10:22:30 AM AEST
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| Reads kinda like a chant... It was totaly great. I liked it alot. I like how it flowed and ran. Very very nice write. |
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Re: Lock and key
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 06:23:35 PM AEST
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Once again a brilliant poem by you, i too had to read it a few times to get the depth of it. Very soulful & dark, i luv'd it.
You are truely talented, keep it up!
Nettie xx |
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Re: Lock and key
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by blueheart on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 10:04:26 AM AEST
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| A unique poem... |
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