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My Pain
Contributed by
Empty_Soul
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Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 07:19:04 PM in AEST
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A few personal problems in my life so I thought i'd try and make another poem out of it.
My pain haunts me through my life
My pain stabs at me like a knife
My pain taunts at me in the night
My pain grabs at my only light
My pain draws tears to my eyes
My pain has to be covered with lies
My pain hurts me so much
My pain has such a cold touch
My pain makes people run away
My pain makes me wich they would stay
My pain......my pain....
I am so alone
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Re: My Pain
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by Empty_Soul on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 07:22:21 PM AEST
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| TYPO! Wich = which. sorry! |
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Re: My Pain
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by forever_lonely on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 07:22:26 PM AEST
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john
excellent write i really feel your pain
excellent style and great flow
keep it up, head and writing
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Re: My Pain
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by Empty_Soul on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 07:23:48 PM AEST
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| DAMN IT! i Mean WISH!!! really sorry again |
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Re: My Pain
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 07:24:11 PM AEST
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Oh so much pain! What a sad poem! Hey don't be sad you're not alone!! The words are really touching! I'm so sad for you! Don't feel this way please!! *cries*
Anne |
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Re: My Pain
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by AliB on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 07:40:33 PM AEST
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good poem, I feel like this sometimes, you're not alone you only have to see the interest in your poetry to see we are out there listening to you.Good luck.
Ali xx |
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Re: My Pain
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 07:43:25 PM AEST
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Pain hurts and you have expressed it well. Please, don't feel alone for we have all been there at one point or another, meaning, we have felt pain and it hurts, oh god does it.
Enjoyed your poem.
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Re: My Pain
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by bychristimsaved on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 08:27:30 PM AEST
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u have a very good writing style!youre poem really made me feel your pain...and i guess i just want to say dont worry, im sure there many people in this world who love you dearly! may jesus bless you!
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