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I need you to leave
Contributed by
Pyrochick
on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 06:43:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Please just leave me
i know thats very hard for me to say
but if you stay
i'm afraid i might go insane
you need to go
so i can move on
get you out of my thoughts
so i can stop dreaming of you
your making me so blue
when i'm thinking of you
i make everyone get away
so i can ponder over why we can't work things through
i'm so tired of crying in the night
all i want is for you to hold me tight
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Pyrochick
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2004-01-14 18:43:32]
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Re: I need you to leave
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 06:47:07 PM AEST
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Aww, so very sad. I do understand wanting them to leave and then wanting them to stay. It tears you into......Or at least it did me...
Thank you for sharing your poem.
Kie
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Re: I need you to leave
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by parisstcair on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 06:56:30 PM AEST
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| I tihnk that was a really good poem. Thats how I'm feeling right now. Keep doing what you do best. |
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Re: I need you to leave
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 05:05:43 PM AEST
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Wow I really liked this one and could relate to it.
'but if you stay
i'm afraid i might go insane
you need to go
so i can move on
get you out of my thoughts
so i can stop dreaming of you'
Incredibly good lines there. Loved 'em. |
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