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I'm just air
Contributed by
Pyrochick
on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 06:31:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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i stand right in front of you
and you don't know i'm there
i try to talk to you
and you continue to pass by
like i'm air
why can't i get you to know that i exsist
why can't i get you to know i'm not part of the crowd
i'm just air to you and everyone else
i try to get into your head
to figure out why i have no chance
but you mind is locked from the inside
so no one can get in
i sit right next to you
but you insist on talking to someone else
who maybe across the room
i'm just air to you
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2004-01-14 18:31:53]
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Re: I'm just air
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 06:35:22 PM AEST
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| So sad to know you feel this way, hope all is well, great write, Val |
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Re: I'm just air
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 05:03:58 PM AEST
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| Good write. I think this was perfectly expressed. Nice job. |
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