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What I Believe In
Contributed by
jeanie
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Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 04:46:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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What I Believe In
Listen with attention
My dear
Have no fear
You've got my devotion
We won't be like
Heartless units, and
Wait breathless minutes
In the universe of tears
We couldn't have spoiled
What says Mr. Freud, our dear
Boss of man-mind engineers
Drop down my cigarette
I won't feel so bad
I'm better off with you
That's my truth
I strongly believe in
Copyright ©
jeanie
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2004-01-14 16:46:08] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: What I Believe In
(User Rating: 1 ) by Necromant on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 04:55:15 PM AEST (User
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Oh what a thoughtful poem! Very positive attitude! Nice one!!
ANne :D |
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Re: What I Believe In
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 02:56:28 PM AEST (User
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Very nice write. I liked it alot. It was interesting and you picked a cool choice of words at times. Nice. |
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