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Beauty From Afar
Contributed by
lostinlimbo
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Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 02:27:01 PM in AEST
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It's okay to look, but I'll never touch
The beautiful one I need so much
I've passed her by and she's never looked twice
Yeah right, like she would.. with all the other guys
Her selection is wide and all begging for her touch
But it's the warmth in her heart that I seek so much
She'll never know my agonizing love for her
And that she is my only one true cure
So for now I'll hide and watch her smile away
Sigh happily and as I listens to what she has to say
Maybe one day.. maybe one day.. It'll all become true
I'll hear those words.. I love you..
And I'll explode with heaven just like her standards bar
And I'll no longer need what I have.. Beauty from Afar
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2004-01-14 14:27:01]
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Re: Beauty From Afar
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by Jackee_line on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 02:38:58 PM AEST
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A very beautiful poem, well written, I can feel the longing you you have.
Well done, an excellent write. |
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Re: Beauty From Afar
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 11:45:31 AM AEST
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Could feel the love flowing from you
Hope you can be with her one day and be happy
Give a few hints if she takes you up on them you know she likes you
Love Angelxx |
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Re: Beauty From Afar
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 11:47:09 AM AEST
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Wonderful poem forgot to add this bit
Well done
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