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Dead End
Contributed by
ArdRi79
on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 01:24:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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Bord, Abused
Raped and Beaten
by your father, a pig!
Homeless now
forced to prostitution
to eat!
Heroin
met your love,
child kicked from your womb
Finally!, free, party
Drunk driver
DEAD
END.
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ArdRi79
... [
2004-01-14 13:24:55] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Dead End
(User Rating: 1 ) by poetrygodslove on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 02:21:20 PM AEST (User
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wow...all i can say wow.....sandy |
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Re: Dead End
(User Rating: 1 ) by eternal_sorrows on
Friday, 16th January 2004 @ 06:39:58 PM AEST (User
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Wow! Short yet, effective. The ending was powerful!.
ES |
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Re: Dead End
(User Rating: 1 ) by TeenageEmoGirl on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 11:08:45 PM AEST (User
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i like this poem a lot and the way you develop it is beautiful |
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