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I'd Be Lyin
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 10:23:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I’d Be Lyin
If I told you that I hate you,
For what you put me through.
And every word you told me,
I never thought was true.
That every time you held me,
In your loving arms.
What you really were doing,
Was causing my heart harm.
That you played me for a fool,
Laughed behind my back.
Never once giving thought,
To how I would react.
If I told you I no longer care,
That I’m ready to move on.
Whatever I felt for you,
Is over, dead and gone.
I’d be lyin.
Copyright ©
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
... [
2004-01-14 10:23:16]
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Re: I'd Be Lyin
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by Fwog on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 10:30:22 AM AEST
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Jeff, this is a wonderful write.
The flow and the simplicity just carry you there.
Love it
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Re: I'd Be Lyin
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by Manicmuze on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 10:45:19 AM AEST
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This is painful and sad... unrequitted love sucks and to love someone who isn't loving you back is pure misery.
Strong poem, very real emotions here, nicely done.
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