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Midnights beauty
Contributed by
loopylou
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Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 04:47:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Midnights beauty
shining from the stars
their reflection in a silver stream
I sit there and dream
in the only place of perfection
the universe is bright
stars shinning unconditional light
the moon always trusting me
as I bathe in its simplicity
I know this is the way everyday life should be
but how do I change the world?
I just sit there admiring the beauty as just one girl
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2004-01-14 04:47:08] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Midnights beauty
(User Rating: 1 ) by Necromant on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 05:44:39 AM AEST (User
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You wrote well in the author's notes Short ans sweet........the universe is bright
stars shinning unconditional light
the moon always trusting me
as i bath in its simplicity
Wow very beautiful wordS!!!!! Keep on writing!!
Anne :D:D |
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