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Share A Secret
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 11:44:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Share A Secret
I’ve come to share a secret,
Something bottled up inside.
I’ve held it for so long,
I no longer want to hide.
You been in my dreams,
Even when I’m awake.
I got to release this burden,
I don’t want to be a fake.
Underneath these sunglasses,
I’ve watched you from afar.
Many nights I’ve prayed,
And wished upon a star.
I wish I could be bold,
And walk right up to you.
But I could never find the courage,
To follow that plan through.
Maybe I’m destined to be alone,
Maybe there’s no one for me.
Yet my heart still lingers,
For loneliness to break free.
So I told you my little secret,
I thought I’d feel better inside.
But reality is I’m wrong,
Now I want to hide.
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Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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2004-01-13 23:44:17]
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Re: Share A Secret
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 11:56:22 PM AEST
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Such is life...huh, Jeff....
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Re: Share A Secret
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by loopylou on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 05:03:12 AM AEST
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| yep somtimes i feel a bit like this but i suppose its just part of being young.....i like the way you wrote this without mentioning insecruity in the actull poem so you could come to your own conclution if this was a good description of it....i think it definatley is.... |
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Re: Share A Secret
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 05:48:30 AM AEST
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Oh very beautiful and touching!!!!
Maybe I’m destined to be alone,
Maybe there’s no one for me.
Yet my heart still lingers,
For loneliness to break free
Wow I loved this stanza! Very flowing and amazing writing!! The messege is very clear hope you find the courage to tell this fortunate woman how much you love her. ;) Keep em' coming!
Anne :D |
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