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Stoping the voices- Ending them in fear!
Contributed by
MajesticPoet
on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 10:53:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Are you confused?
Trying to figure out how it feels to walk a mile in the shoes,
The shoes of a man that has nothing to lose,
The shoes of a man with no more dues.
You let your fear put you in a place,
Too complicated for you to escape,
This is your complex fate,
You’re getting closer to knocking on heavens gate.
I know I am running through your head now,
If it was up to you, I would be dead now.
I’ll let the world know you are a coward, who is filled with lies,
You can never be a man; I can smell the fear in your eyes.
I am on the verge of something furious,
It has your mind all-curious,
Are you having nightmares of homicidal fantasies?
Are you thinking about my suicidal tendencies?
No more hesitation, this information has me contemplating,
That I should bring elimination to this conversation,
I am about to show you the face of a mental patient,
A patient in celebration, anticipation of the ending of my creation.
You should see these signs,
You have been blinded,
I am coming for you; hell hath no fury of a man scorn,
I put you in the cemetery, no wondering, no one warned.
My every move is a calculated step,
To bring you closer to this early death,
No memories, just the misery,
Are you dreaming of me killing you in your sleep?
I am in a craze,
Disillusioned lately,
This is the final phase,
This suffering has thanked me greatly.
The end is near, I can’t take it much longer,
The voices have to stop,
I thought I could be stronger,
This is the only way to stop the voices, watching my body shake and drop…
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MajesticPoet
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2004-01-13 22:53:09] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Stoping the voices- Ending them in fear!
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 12:02:39 AM AEST (User
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Well done, friend.
huggs, luv,
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Re: Stoping the voices- Ending them in fear!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cancer on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 12:57:21 AM AEST (User
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very vivid.
"Are you dreaming of me killing you in your sleep?"
quite liked that line.
interesting write. makes me think of Fight Club.
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Re: Stoping the voices- Ending them in fear!
(User Rating: 1 ) by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 01:19:59 PM AEST (User
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I thought this was bloody awesome... I can relate to this quite a bit it was very well written.
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Re: Stoping the voices- Ending them in fear!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 12:38:29 AM AEST (User
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Wow this was damned good. I enjoyed how you wrote this one even more. Nice. |
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