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Something i want to be
Contributed by
isaiyan
on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 09:33:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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It's you,
that i've always wanted to be
but here I am
stuck on your outside
it drives me crazy that
no one will remember me
but will you?
could you?
believe in me? Please?
Can you?
Believe in me?
I'm begging you, can you remember me?
Please, don't forget me
I don't know how to live.
this is dedicated to you
my one and only true happiness
i have this hard conscience and barriers
that i know that i need to break.. someday
i want to, so ******* bad
Can you help me?
Will you?
Please? But still can you,
believe in me?
But
remember?
even though you don't need me
remember?
even if you don't need me
remember?
REMEMBER?
Don't forget me, don't leave me,
don't love me.
I'm the dumb one
who can't understand
who doesn't want to understand
sometimes, i find that i can do no more
i've did everything. I've tried so hard.
maybe you shouldn't believe in me.
Maybe you should ignore me?
Please..
Copyright ©
isaiyan
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2004-01-13 21:33:08]
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Re: Something i want to be
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 12:33:11 AM AEST
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| Interesting... I liked it. I think I can understand it pretty well too. Good write. |
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Re: Something i want to be
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by mercedes on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 12:36:12 AM AEST
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| Yes, good write. |
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