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Insincere
Contributed by
olive
on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 09:10:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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You make me uncomfortable
with your insincere gestures
of some imagined civility we must have.
You don't intend to ever truly reach me.
You don't want to feel anything for me.
But, like a master, you pretend.
Don't smile at me
that way
because it's just like ice
and it chills me deep down.
Truly
I'd rather feel
your hateful slaps
on my face
than your apathy.
Manners were not created
to separate our souls from one another.
Copyright ©
olive
... [
2004-01-13 21:10:10]
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Re: Insincere
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by loopylou on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 05:23:12 AM AEST
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| intreasting.....i understand i think? a poem about not being fake? i liked it anyway |
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Re: Insincere
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 12:15:45 AM AEST
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| Interesting... |
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Re: Insincere
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 04:59:01 AM AEST
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| resonative. very emotive. substantive. three superlatives. I could go on - but I won't. . . . |
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