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O.C.D.
Contributed by
sheilasin
on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 07:54:33 PM in AEST
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The contents of my life
Life with strife
A scare
My hair
My year
In disrepair
At the mercy of externals
Never prepared for the onslaught
The images vivid in my head
Of dread and woe
And so it goes
Living a lifetime every day
A roller coaster ride
Over the top with meaning
Significant losses
Casualties in the millions
This feeling of impending doom
Fills the room
And squeezes me out
Until there is only dread
Such horror in my head
Means surely someone must be dead
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Re: O.C.D.
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by olive on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 09:13:15 PM AEST
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| I felt like this was a very vivid look into your life. Very powerful. But, along with the pain, our minds have beautiful mysteries that we cannot even understand. ~olive |
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Re: O.C.D.
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by EmSal on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 11:00:25 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this. Good write.
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Re: O.C.D.
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 02:30:46 PM AEST
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I'm guessing u have obsessive-compulsive disorder.
This feeling of impending doom
Fills the room
And squeezes me out
I can relate to these lines so much. I've been manic (bi-polar) for the past 3 days and its hard to cope. Hang in there if u ever wanna chat PM me.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: O.C.D.
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 12:30:10 PM AEST
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| This was a good write. I have no idea what ocd is but it was a very good write. The last one was good too. Music sometimes sadly is the only thing that saves us when others are too stupid to try to help. |
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Re: O.C.D.
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by Somnium on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 08:31:53 AM AEST
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In had a lot of mental problems in my life, stay in there, and dont give up. Always bel;ieve you can be cured cause otherwise you never will be
Ben :) |
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