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Lost soul Ztracená duše
Contributed by
Aika
on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 07:06:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I hear steps
Echo
Are they mine?
Blaming myself
For they´re so loud
Beat into the silence
I step on darkness
Soul so sad
I don´t see light
Only hear to beat
My heart:
„let her be
she´s looking for herself
lost her aim
summer chilling her
winter warming
she fell in morast
of promising words
stood under waterfall
on a small step
to wash out the guilty
was not possible
She walked further
But storm of jeer
As thought gnawing
Driving her to hurry
She´ll be lost more
Poor soul
What to rede her?
Impossible lower
Then higher
But her fall
Still closer
Standing on edge
Sun on the right
Turns her back
There´s the dark
On the left
Light is too bright
Wait for sunset?
And surprised
Telling herself:
nope
Headlong dives
To the dark"
I hear the scream
So familiar seems
Touching myself
I do not feel heat
Soul in the prison
And heaven is hell
Millions tears
Falling down my face
Looking for a soul
For one body
Heart beating
Although did not want it
But it has to
Cos life suits it
Don´t you know the path?
Don´t you know the soul?
Slyším kroky,
Ozvěnu
Jsou mé vlastní?
Kladu si za vinu
Že jsou tak hlučné
Bijí do ticha
Šlapu tmou
Duše přesmutná
Nevidím světlo
Jen slyším být
Srdce na poplach
„Nechte ji jít
Hledá sebe
Ztratila cíl
Léto ji zebe
A zima hřeje ji
Upadla v močál
Slibných slov
Stoupla pod vodopád
Na malý schod
Smýt tu vinu
Ne, to nešlo
Šla o kus dál,
Leč bouře výsměchu
Jak myšlenka hlodá
Žene ji do spěchu
To nezní dobře
Ztratí se víc
Ubohá duše
Co jen jí říct?
Když to nejde níž
Jde výš
Ale ten pád
Je stále blíž
Stojí na hraně
Slunce napravo
Otočí se
Tma zase
Nalevo
Světlo příliš jasné
Čekat na západ?
A sama žasne
Že řekne ani nápad
Zbrkle se vrhne
Přímo do tmy
Slyším ten výkřik
Je mi povědomý
Sahám na sebe
A necítím teplo
Duše ve vězení
A z nebe je peklo
Milion slziček
Po tváři steklo
Hledám duši
Pro jedno tělo
Srdce buší
Ač nechtělo
Ale musí
Život mu sluší
Neznáš cestu?
Neznáš tu duši?......
Copyright ©
Aika
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2004-01-13 19:06:16]
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Re: Lost soul Ztracená duše
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by jeanie on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 08:27:59 PM AEST
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wow, i think that this one is even better in czech ;) :D almost scary :p nice nice job :))
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Re: Lost soul Ztracená duše
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 12:45:17 AM AEST
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Dear Aika,
So many lost souls in this world that I know.
This poem was so good at explaining the
sorrow they show.
Never knowing which way to go....
This was a very emotional write Aida
but one I thoroughly enjoyed.
One of your best
Love you,
ConSue |
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Re: Lost soul Ztracená duše
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 05:54:55 AM AEST
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Very realistic! I liked this one, also very original!
I hear the scream
So familiar seems
Touching myself
I do not feel heat
Soul in the prison
And heaven is hell
Millions tears
Falling down my face
Wonderful!
Anne :D |
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Re: Lost soul Ztracená duše
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 05:02:32 AM AEST
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I think we are all lost souls in some way Aika...different reasons for different people.
One thing is sure, your work is not lost in here, it truly has a home !!
steve x |
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Re: Lost soul Ztracená duše
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by Cobalt on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 12:03:20 PM AEST
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| That was damn good. Incredibly write. I loved every word and line. |
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