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Childhood Reality
Contributed by
CuttersAngel
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Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 06:45:52 PM in AEST
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Right out the window
There goes time
With nothing to show
Except these rhymes
My childhood is over
I shall never return
To an endless forever
And nothing learned
Memories of scars
Of a horrid past
And goals that didn't go far
And love that didn't last
With tears that never stop
Fears that won't descend
I never reached the top
I didn't keep close friends
I didn't run and play
I didn't laugh and sing
I dreaded each day
I hated everything
I stayed in my world
I was only myself
In a ball I stayed curled
I put memories on the shelf
I stay locked away
So no one could see
But I had so much to say
But no one knew me
They didn't know what made me happy
They didn't know what made me sad
They didn't know about eternity
They didn't know about the bad
They lived their lives sheltered
Each day with a smile
Believing things only get better
Believing things lasted awhile
They lived in a world of lies
Sheltered from the truth
They didn't know what it was like to truly cry
They alway did as they were told to
And when they get to high school
They expect it to be the same
They think they know all the rules
But the truth is life's a game.
Copyright ©
CuttersAngel
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2004-01-13 18:45:52]
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Re: Childhood Reality
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 07:21:20 PM AEST
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very good write... I enjoyed reading this.. this is very true about younger people
Peace
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Re: Childhood Reality
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by SkYYBLu on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 07:44:37 PM AEST
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| Very true indeed. Innocence doesn't last very long. Great write. |
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Re: Childhood Reality
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by CountryGirl on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 08:50:15 PM AEST
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| Exactly the reality that no child really understands. Great truth lies in this writing. |
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Re: Childhood Reality
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by hope on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 09:32:01 PM AEST
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i loved this it really touched me and hit home....great write.
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Re: Childhood Reality
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by MajesticPoet on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 10:59:04 PM AEST
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Very good write. I like this one.. Keep up the good work...
Majestic |
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Re: Childhood Reality
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by EmSal on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 11:11:26 PM AEST
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Excellent write. Especailly what they don't know. All the best.
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Re: Childhood Reality
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 11:34:27 PM AEST
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Love it! It's so true. Another great write, keep 'em coming!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Childhood Reality
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by parisstcair on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 07:14:26 PM AEST
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I really understand were you are coming from. You have a very good point. I love this poem please write more.
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Re: Childhood Reality
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 01:50:26 AM AEST
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| awesome... well done! |
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