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One night at the hill.
Contributed by
13hopes
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Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 06:02:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
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From my hill i can see the world, my own special place. A million lights from the city, shining up behind your face. I feel your arms around me, my heart begins to race. Then i feel your lips gently touching mine, your kiss so ever devine. Your words i hear you love me, you made my whole world cease. With you in my life, now i am at peace. My hill had been a special place, now one that is the best. When i return there my heart will never rest.I want to return there again, i want to share it again with you. Just so i can say that my love for you is true.
Yes it is an invitation.....!!
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Re: One night at the hill.
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 06:46:06 PM AEST
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| These words are so lovely ... I think it would have been much nicer if you had set it out like a poem rather than a story ... but still I like it very much ... Jan |
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Re: One night at the hill.
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 07:06:55 PM AEST
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| wonderfully spoken, the beauty is heard thru these words, take care, Val |
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Re: One night at the hill.
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 12:34:59 AM AEST
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So kind, So peaceful, So loving, So inviting!
beautifully written too!
ConSue |
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Re: One night at the hill.
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by Cobalt on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 08:25:57 PM AEST
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| Very nice write. Filled with just the right emotions. I liked this. |
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Re: One night at the hill.
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by emystar on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 05:42:28 AM AEST
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Wow friend,
don't know where your hill is but this write is heavenly!
Awesome!
luv, huggs,
emy
thanks for all your sweet comments on my work. |
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