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Betrayal
Contributed by
Darchelle
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Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 05:02:39 PM in AEST
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What did I do to you
That was so wrong you had to treat me this way?
I supported you, called you,
Hung out with you everyday.
Maybe you just got tired of me
And all the things I did for you.
You must have thought I was around too much,
So you decided you needed something new.
It hurts me so much,
Even thought you don't know.
I guess life will go on,
But now my feelings have to show.
I've always been there for you,
Since grade school and more.
Even though you leave me out,
That I'm for sure.
You don't even treat me like a friend,
Unless there's something you need.
If everyone else is busy,
You call me because you know with me you can succeed.
When I say you haven't called in awhile,
You say you had a crisis.
But I know the real reason,
He came between us.
I like him, too
And it was you on which I was relying.
But you betrayed me,
And our friendship is dying.
So now you and I are drifting apart,
As we both like the same guy.
He likes you though,
I don't know, maybe I was too shy.
You didn't really support me,
Even when I said I wanted to die.
But you wouldn't show any emotion,
Even if somebody made me cry.
You don't care about my feelings,
You just look away.
But we keep on saying,
We're going to live together someday.
Even though you may not want to,
I still do.
I hope we are best friends again
By the time high school is through.
Copyright ©
Darchelle
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2004-01-13 17:02:39]
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Re: Betrayal
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 07:29:14 PM AEST
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excellent write about losing a friend.. i have lost afriend myself over something really stupid and we don't even talk.. I hope things work out for you and you can become friends again..
Peace
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Re: Betrayal
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by jeanie on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 09:10:50 PM AEST
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well, I've almost lost my best friend for really stupid thing...and it cost me alot of strength to fix it with her, but I've made it and now I'm super happy for that. and then she told me that when two ppl split up then it's all happening only for that tehy're meant to be together again...so I think you can be as well ;)
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Re: Betrayal
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by Cobalt on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 08:19:21 PM AEST
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| Very good show of emotion. Good write. |
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