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Pity Isen't Love
Contributed by
Naoko
on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 03:56:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I need comfort but I do not want it
Don't act like I'm a princess
It might burn your princely garb
You'll just leave me when you've had enough
Pity isen't love
Pity isen't love
You've caught me in an unfair situation
Sister duck taped my mouth shut
So I can't tell you "no"
Pity isen't love
This is unimagineable
And don't you slam a cliche in my face either
You don't love me
I don't love you
You pity me
I pity you
You hurt me
I hurt you
This affection is fake, but necessary
You're not like she was
You're unspecial
You're unartistic
You're self-sufficent
You're unattractive
You're untrue
You're deflateable
You're unoriginal
You're dreamless
...but you care
I'm fairly sure, I really am unsure
Possabilities I've toyed with;
Situations I've considered
Such strong words,
How can I ignore?
Copyright ©
Naoko
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2004-01-13 15:56:53]
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Re: Pity Isen't Love
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 04:10:17 PM AEST
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you spoke volumes here well done
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Re: Pity Isen't Love
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 07:33:33 PM AEST
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wow impressive.. that is very true pity isnt love i liked that .. great job
peace
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Re: Pity Isen't Love
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by Cobalt on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 07:52:58 PM AEST
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| Well it was a very good write. You did indeed speak volumes with so much less. Wrote this long ago huh? Very filled with emotion. Nice. |
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