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Who Is Gonna Pardon Me?
Contributed by
jeanie
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Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 03:54:09 PM in AEST
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Who Is Gonna Pardon Me?
Maybe I should start to pray
Coz what if there's the God
Who can wipe out clouds of gray
That life has brought
Up there, above my head
I just lack the faith
Things seem so straight
I need to suffer
They're waiting for me
Deep beneath, under my feet
I feel weak when I fall
I feel like staying down
I know it doesn't help at all
I need a while to stand up from my knees
So, what may, just come
I don't believe in prophecies
After all I have done
Things can't get worse
At least that, please, Lord
Copyright ©
jeanie
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2004-01-13 15:54:09]
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Re: Who Is Gonna Pardon Me?
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by Necromant on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 04:07:02 PM AEST
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BEAUTIFUL!!! Wow I feel like you! Yepp definitely! Wonderful words! The ending is grand! Full of hope! WoW
Anne :d continue writing!! |
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Re: Who Is Gonna Pardon Me?
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 04:12:35 PM AEST
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I share these feelings with you for sure this is spectacular!
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Re: Who Is Gonna Pardon Me?
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 05:39:26 PM AEST
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I could feel the questions and pain in your poem. You expressed it really well.
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Re: Who Is Gonna Pardon Me?
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by Cobalt on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 07:51:00 PM AEST
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| This was exceptional. Damn good write. Very friggin good. I think I'm right there with you. I've been trying to convince myself life is grand and will only get worse if someone dies... Keep up this great writing. I loved this one. Perfect! |
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Re: Who Is Gonna Pardon Me?
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 06:35:36 PM AEST
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We all have times in life when we feel like there's no hope, like we've hit the bottom, yet God is there, and He will give us a hand to lift us up. Maybe in a friend or in some other way. but God will be there.
Take care.
David |
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