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Confusion Ray
Contributed by
alecfernadez
on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 12:48:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Confusion rides inside my mind,
Boiling my thoughts,
Raping inside
It devours my mind into pieces,
shattered steel of reality,
Confusion is my thesis
Narrows my mind to gravity,
Pulls me over and under,
Creates a black hole cavity
It divides my heart into portions,
Rips my soul into flakes,
Fills my mind with precaution
Makes me see all these faces,
Blind and hated,
Walking backwards tired paces
Makes me see the other realm,
All these Happy places,
Puts me in control at the helm
Ripps my ears from underneath me,
Death to the world and transparent,
It makes me slowly bleed
Confusion puts these thoughts inside,
Cutting at me, burning my flesh,
And then all I can do is hide
Running over my legs at once,
Break them in two,
I guess its just a hunch
That it will eat my brain,
Devour my soul,
Make me insane
So paranoid because of confusion,
Sectioned and dissasociate from you,
These images are just an illusion
Running out of places to run,
Legs so tired, heart so hurting,
My wings still work, and I fly to the sun
But I never understand all these feelings,
Burning inside me,
Raping all my healings,
So I come to you as I fall back
Of this stone floor,
Into the sky, a place which I lack
I cant seem to pull the trigger,
end these tears,
Cant; Go figure
Its hurting me making me bleed,
Confusion envoloping me,
Pull the trigger than you'll see
Whats wrong with me
Copyright ©
alecfernadez
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2004-01-13 12:48:44]
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Re: Confusion Ray
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 01:23:18 PM AEST
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Re: Confusion Ray
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by Manicmuze on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 01:26:52 PM AEST
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reminds me of a poet :)
i've been to these places and writing about them is the only thing to do.
Strong and intense poem, well done.
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Re: Confusion Ray
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by MissTea on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 01:34:29 PM AEST
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absolutly awesome alex! now one of my personal favourites out of ALL the poems i've read!!
I loved it, absolutly LOVED it!!
well done alex!! well done
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Re: Confusion Ray
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 02:59:44 PM AEST
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You are a very talented poet. Deep, dark, formidable & filled with pain. You expressed it beautifully.
Kie |
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Re: Confusion Ray
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 05:13:31 PM AEST
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| My wings still work as I fly to the sun, extremely fantastic wording here, very powerful, as we have all been there, thanks for sharing this gem of yours, keep up the great work, take care Val |
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Re: Confusion Ray
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 09:18:55 AM AEST
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| wow! thats all i can say, you are a great writer. never stop. such a powerful poem. |
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Re: Confusion Ray
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 05:22:51 PM AEST
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| Alec... Dude that blew me away. I absolutely loved it from the opening comment to the last lines. This was like pure genious. I think you are an awesome poet. Rock on man. |
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