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Memories
Contributed by
Valerie_Pearson
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Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 12:47:16 PM in AEST
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Tis, ageless are the memories,
as February skies renew,
wondering, when we will meet,
and touch the hands of you,
~~~~
Grandpa, how your light still shines,
with you, we knew it would,
The day we said good-by to you,
we never understood,
~~~~
You left us not a parting,
but strong roots to carry on,
because Grandpa, all in whom you touched,
knew that you were fond,
~~~~
You thought of us so plentiful,
with all your heart and soul,
your spirit filled us gracefully,
before you had to go,
~~~~
Consoled by your deep love,
that graced us thru these years,
In February skies we gaze,
holding back the tears,
~~~~
And so we sigh in memory,
once again to see your face,
knowing that your love is near,
as you reside in Heaven's grace!
( though I was only 4 years old when he died, he left an everlasting mark on my heart )
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Valerie_Pearson
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Re: Memories
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by alecfernadez on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 01:22:36 PM AEST
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... Speechless, he must have been a really greatgrandad to you, that young to write something so passionate about the memories you have of him.
Keep up the good work
Alec Fernandez
(19 members online, No-ones reading, No-ones commenting, basically every1s being a little bit lazy today) |
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by PumpkinPie on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 01:52:06 PM AEST
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Great poem Val ! Your grandfather probably knew how much you loved him and watches over you.Great poem,
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 03:33:30 PM AEST
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this is lovely Val such precious memories of your grandfather.
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 04:29:13 PM AEST
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With tears in my eyes let me say this write touched me very deeply. A grandfather like that is never forgotten and always missed. A wonderful tribute, I commend you.
Kie |
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Re: Memories
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 04:56:42 PM AEST
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| Oh Val, this is hauntingly beautiful ... the flow, the rhyme, the words ... gorgeous write ... Jan |
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Re: Memories
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 09:35:37 AM AEST
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| Val, What beautiful words for him,I'm sure hes looking down smiling! Very touching this was to me! Christina |
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Re: Memories
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by Fwog on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 10:06:21 AM AEST
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G'day Val,
You of the most beautiful heart and soul, no doubt you are deserving of such a grandfather.
Beautiful, sensitive write.
you're still the one
Hugz,
Dal
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 10:18:27 AM AEST
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What a beautiful and compassionate write, Val... Truly touching....
Hugs
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Re: Memories
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 08:59:55 PM AEST
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| wow, he must have been so special to give you such beautiful lasting words so filled with love, wish i had met him, i imagine our grampas up there right now having a chat hehe, {about us i bet lol} big hugs n' love nessa x |
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Re: Memories
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by Chester_England_White on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 07:56:00 AM AEST
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Hi Val
First I would like to thank you for your comment on my poems. I pray God lead me in all I wrote! I just wanted to say how I enjoyed you writing in memory of Grandpa Roeske. It is amazing how people that pass through our live for only a moment can leave such a lasting impression! I know you will see Him again!
Chester
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Re: Memories
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 11:59:28 PM AEST
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Great poem. It's beautiful.
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