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A Single Woman's Prayer
Contributed by
dudleysgirl
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Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 12:38:16 PM in AEST
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As I lay me down to sleep,
I pray thee, Lord, don't make me weep.
You know what I need far better than I,
but I'll ask you this once and not be shy.
Please send me the one who is loyal and true
and takes time to know me, through and through.
Be sure that he laughs in spite of himself
and touches my heart above all else.
Give him eyes (any hue) that are loving and kind
and he'll see the same when he looks into mine.
He'll need to be patient and willing to share,
open and honest and always fair.
I know this might be a king-sized task,
but I want my best friend. Too much to ask?
I'll cherish this man now and forever,
my heart, my soul, my friend and lover.
Oh and Lord, with men, you know how it goes;
so this one thing would you be sure he knows?
That T and A are NOT the only female body parts!
There's also M and H (that's Mind and Heart).
A M E N
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dudleysgirl
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Re: A Single Woman's Prayer
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by alecfernadez on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 01:26:09 PM AEST
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lol, great work, it sounds so sincire at first, and the ending... Well I laughed! (i'm not easy to make laugh)
Alec Fernandez
(thinkin of leavin,cos people have stopped readin, whats the point of doin this work,
when no-one reads, comments it hurts) |
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Re: A Single Woman's Prayer
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by PumpkinPie on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 03:06:54 PM AEST
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Great poem,it made me laugh and made me smile ! Great thoughts,rhymes and everything went well !I enjoyed reading it !
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Re: A Single Woman's Prayer
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by CountryGirl on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 03:54:41 PM AEST
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| LOL..What a true prayer and cute at that. Pertaining to this..my prayer was answered and it was over the net. Great Job! |
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Re: A Single Woman's Prayer
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 04:46:32 PM AEST
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| Cool poem, really enjoyed this, made me smile ... Jan |
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Re: A Single Woman's Prayer
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 04:55:14 PM AEST
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Hahaha....loved this...... Thanks for sharing..
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Re: A Single Woman's Prayer
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by DJ_The_Young_Grasshopper on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 12:23:33 AM AEST
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| That was sweet. I liked it:). |
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Re: A Single Woman's Prayer
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 12:57:30 PM AEST
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| Hey now. T&A can mean a few other things... Like uhhh... Tongue and arms... Err yeah. Good write. I'd say the challenge was well met. Hey if someone has no intelligence it won't last long. Besides all beauty is fleeting in time. |
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