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A Kiss
Contributed by
ml03
on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 03:10:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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kiss
to last
for a lifetime
play'd
again and again
over and over
in my memory
your sweet embrace
your lips
soft and tame
wet wit desire
ready
to risk it
for a moment
eyes
held shut
all i see is the beauty
of darkness
the innocence of life
wiltin'
slowly
petal by petal
lips
spread wide open
massagin'
borderline
between good and bad
innocent and x-rated
tongues
caress one and other
up and down
leadin' away
from righteousness
one kiss
to last
taint'd by the journey
the return
it was so pure
and innocent
were did it go
off track
when did we take
the exit
to hardcore sexxxiness
mommy
never said
it start'd wit a kiss
that it would all be
so innocent
and daddy
never told me
'bout the birds
and the bees
or what to expect
all they said
was
it was bad
and you'd go to hell
and burn
for an eternity
but
believe me
i didn't know
i was doin' anything
wrong
i thought
it was all just a kiss
so innocent
am i slut
a hoe
my cherry
is popp'd
can you see
the change
in my eyes
do i look more
mature
or has darkness
consum'd me
am i satan's spawn
cause
of a kiss
mommy
you ain't all perfect
daddy
neither are you
so
will you be
in hell wit me
will we cry
together
will we burn
together
will it be
a family affair?
Copyright ©
ml03
... [
2004-01-13 03:10:58]
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Re: A Kiss
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by lonesomerose on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 03:19:47 AM AEST
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dreamy
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Re: A Kiss
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by whisper-of-night on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 08:36:35 AM AEST
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| Wow-ho-ho! Easy now!^_^ A kiss should be something very special and intimate, holy and pure, but of course it could go other way depend on how you look at it; just treat the kiss with respect and you will be an Angel! ^_^ Smooth beautiful work! |
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Re: A Kiss
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 12:22:47 PM AEST
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| This was a very good write and I like how you ended it. I think it conveyed your feelings very well. Well done. |
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