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untitled
Contributed by
desertwispers
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Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 02:24:46 AM in AEST
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No title for this poem you see
because there is no title worthy
to write about miss priss
super classy really sassy
smile as big as a country mile.
Skipping about without a care
while others live in despair
shes happy yes she is
had to travel the country to find it.
Its easy to run away
and be a tiny coward
when all the while
the ghosts will creep around.
They will haunt and taunt
little miss priss
come down off your soap dish
your no better than me.
Untitled because this isnt worth a title
neither or you.
Copyright ©
desertwispers
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2004-01-13 02:24:46]
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Re: untitled
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by lonesomerose on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 02:37:08 AM AEST
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Crystal
I know who you are referring this to and I think this is a bit rude. You forget I live in the same place you do so I suggest you stop this now.She is my friend and has been for years and I think she deserves every bit of happiness she has now. Im baffled about this entire deal and dont know what the problem is but it needs to stop and right now. If you wont talk on the phone dont come here to write your nonesense.Leave it be she has.Yes your right she does have a smile of a country mile and its one of the most beautiful Iv seen. So Crystal just knock it off!! |
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Re: untitled
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 02:57:37 AM AEST
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this is not the place for this kind of thing...it seems to me you are the one with the problem...maybe it is time you looked within and saw where the ugly is really coming from...i don't know what your problem is but striking out at someone else will not solve it...maybe it is time to look at what your friend has really done for you...and stop acting like a spoiled child who did not get their way...your write to me looks more like jealousy because someone else is happy...maybe it is time you tried to find the happiness yourself and stop trying to ruin someone elses
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Re: untitled
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by loopylou on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 01:29:36 PM AEST
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| um well even though you didnt have the best intentions when writting this it was still a well written poem so i thought you deserved at least one decent comment!! |
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Re: untitled
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 01:41:20 PM AEST
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thanks Crystal I appreciate that wonderful comment on my smile to bad you dont know how to smile anymore these days. As for the rest well your not showing much taste and I will have to ask you to stop writing this stuff on this site.My only regret now is that I wished I never would have invited you here. Bye
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Re: untitled
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 10:13:55 AM AEST
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| Ok. I think it was well written. I'll just let this go at this. I think you all need to let it go better. It's not a big deal. |
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