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learning to fall
Contributed by
Cancer
on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 01:30:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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held on too tight
for way too long
but i'm learning
learning to let go
learning to give up
it all seemed worth it
at the time
i forgot everything
when i saw her there
but now i remember again
and i'm learning
learning to let go
learning to give up
i must confess
i faked the rest
the best i gave was really
just what i could get away with
too busy learning
learning to fall
it isn't easy
that much i know
it hurts to stay
but it's hell to go
(it all seemed worth it
when i saw her there
forgot everything
when i saw her there
felt like things were changing
when i saw her there
dropped my guard to hope
when i saw her there)
just like everything
she was just a broken piece
i tried to fit her in
but her edges were too jagged
bled when i held her
you know, death tastes alot like a kiss
but none of that matters now
so blind for so long
held on for so long
a fool for so long
and now i say "so long"
because i'm learning
and i'm learning fast
learning to give up
(it's so easy now)
learning to let go
(this means nothing to me)
learning to say "goodbye"
(no wave, just a smile)
i'm learning to fall
and it tastes like your kiss
Copyright ©
Cancer
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2004-01-13 01:30:25]
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Re: learning to fall
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 01:37:24 AM AEST
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letting go is the hardwest part but at times we have to.This brought me to tears for many reasons.
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Re: learning to fall
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 02:51:24 AM AEST
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| I relate to these words sooooo much .... very well expressed ... Jan |
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Re: learning to fall
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by afraid_of_fear on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 07:06:37 AM AEST
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This is so sad.. i can sense the hurt in your words..
x_x_x |
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Re: learning to fall
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 06:56:00 PM AEST
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I could smell the pain in this. Sometimes we need to let go in order to save ourselves. I like how u said u were 'learning to fall' that was great-o.
Peace,
Joel (Bobo) |
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Re: learning to fall
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 10:01:45 AM AEST
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| To be honest... This one made me want to cry. I know this one all too well.... |
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