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Out of the Pain of hells hole!
Contributed by
MajesticPoet
on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 10:55:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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In this turbulent world, no one else could see,
An unfamiliar place of plexus misery.
Confusion erased her name from my mind,
Terror and hopelessness was all I could find.
Ignorant comments reaped frustration and pain,
Would I ever be in her world, ever again?
Afraid to hold her, afraid I would fall,
Off the moving carpet which was still to all.
Disturbance dictated, sweat smeared my palms,
I wanted to hold her steady in my arms.
Howling in anguish for I could not cry,
Irrational grieving, no reasons why.
Phobic of everything and everyone near,
In a time of ruin, torment and fear.
Morbid anxiety took hold of me strong,
I lost my loves, Yet I did nothing wrong.
Dejected and hollow, with progress slow,
A love for a woman that just wouldn’t show.
Safely in my heart I cherished her with care,
I was once her lover in my own turmoil of total despair.
Recovery hindered by prejudice remarks,
The soul inside me took walks to the parks.
Despondent dispirited by words unjust,
I learned to forgive and in myself to trust.
Courage gradually led me to a path of new,
Where grass became green and the sky became blue.
Learning to live again now an obsession,
My love I missed – in a world of depression.
A life was taken to a traumatic hell,
Painful to recall, painful to tell,
As far as you can fall, is as far as I fell,
Tears from this lonely soul – now trying to live life well.
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Re: Out of the Pain of hells hole!
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by Naoko on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 11:20:31 PM AEST
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I enjoyed that suprisingly, I did'nt think I would at first baised on the title...
I really like the line "The soul inside me took walks to the parks" in particular.
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Re: Out of the Pain of hells hole!
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by MajesticPoet on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 12:06:28 AM AEST
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I am happy that you liked it, and appreciate your honesty in your comments. I guess the old syaing "Dont judge a book by its' cover" goes well in this case :D Thank you again for your comments..
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Re: Out of the Pain of hells hole!
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 01:06:55 AM AEST
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| I liked this poem. I like how you wrote it out. It was good. Very good use of words. Wasn't put of by the title though lol. |
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