|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
You , Me and Ecstasy
Contributed by
Mouth
on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 10:50:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
|
These eyes I read,
Not like a page;
Not like a book.
Their depth is my unknown
They pull me inward
And I feel a closeness
Words would only undo..
Silence.
Your paradise in the palm of my hand.
Nothing between us but skin
And silence.
In this silence is spoken-
I am your secret,
You are my lie.
Such fragile bliss,
Like the uncertainty of things
Outside these walls.
Between them your paradise has flourished
Its splendor I know as well as your silence,
I know its every sin...
I wear your unsaid words on my skin,
I feel your silence burst into song as you taste me.
It is then I understand the depth left unexplored;
The reckless nature of your love..
You, me and ecstasy
Your paradise in the palm of my hand.
Nothing between us but secrets and lies.
Nothing between os but you and I.
Your eyes I read,
Not like a page;
Not like a book.
There depth is to my unknown.
And my skin has once again betrayed my heart,
Just as my ecstasy betrays another,
But my pain has never known such pleasure
Copyright ©
Mouth
... [
2004-01-12 22:50:12]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: You , Me and Ecstasy
(User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 01:03:35 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I liked how this was written. It was very good. Nice write. |
|
|
Re: You , Me and Ecstasy
(User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 01:52:46 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
After reading April Mournings,I decided to read a few more of your poetry and I can honestly say these are some of the best poems I have read in a while.I love the way you write---I especially loved this one as well.Keep writing,
Sincerely,
PumpkinPie |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
