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Because of love
Contributed by
forever_lonely
on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 08:11:58 PM in AEST
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If deaths angel
Doth take me tonight
I will go with
No tear in my eyes
For i have know love
If in morrow
Sun rays hath no shine
I shall still smile
For you say your mine
I belong to you
If In a few days
Fate says you must go
My heart and head
wish it were not so
For i can feel you
Through parting hard
(im sure to cry)
For i have know you
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2004-01-12 20:11:58]
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Re: Because of love
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 08:25:39 PM AEST
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still lovely but sort of sad...liked the other one better
Shari |
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Re: Because of love
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by Necromant on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 02:30:04 PM AEST
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Oh so sad!! Very touching words and woderful flow! Keep it up!! :D
Anne ;) |
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Re: Because of love
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by Wrybod on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 11:14:51 AM AEST
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Just a little bit special this one.
You are two lines short in the last verse?????
How about....
Through parting hard
(I'm sure to cry)
for I have known love
from a wonderful guy
yes, I have known you |
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Re: Because of love
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 04:37:13 PM AEST
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| This hath the sound of hope in it. Of a sort of joy that can stay with one even if dark times come. That's too rare these days. Keep it up! |
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Re: Because of love
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 05:50:13 PM AEST
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I know this is stupid of me to re-comment but I had to since I made a terrible mistake in my first comment. This poem is everything but sad! Its wonderful has a very positive attitude and shows an ammount of great love! I loved the words especially the old english ones, sort of reminds me of shakespeare. The imagery is fantastic. This poem should have loads of other comments!! Keep it up!!
Anne ;) (forgive my stupidity) |
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Re: Because of love
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 05:57:52 PM AEST
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I know this is stupid of me to re-comment but I had to since I made a terrible mistake in my first comment. This poem is everything but sad! Its wonderful has a very positive attitude and shows an ammount of great love! I loved the words especially the old english ones, sort of reminds me of shakespeare. The imagery is fantastic. This poem should have loads of other comments!! Keep it up!!
Anne ;) (forgive my stupidity) |
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