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Take Me
Contributed by
stephierose
on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 06:56:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Life is to long
I just want out
There's nothing here for me
But my tears
And your fake sympathy
So take the breath you gave me
Take what life has left in my heart
Everything is deteriorating
My world is falling apart ...
Copyright ©
stephierose
... [
2004-01-12 18:56:06]
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Re: Take Me
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by SkYYBLu on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 06:59:08 PM AEST
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OMG I KNOW EXACTLY HOW YOU FEEL!!!
This is sooo weird!
go to my website: www.xanga.com/numbxsoul
I loved this. I know of false sympathy and people pretending to care so that they're conscience can be clear. GREAT WRITE! |
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Re: Take Me
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 07:24:54 PM AEST
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| wow thats an awsome poem man!! cant say i feel this way but hey .. and its not fake sympathy:P |
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Re: Take Me
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by lonesomerose on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 02:48:40 AM AEST
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| I do understand this. |
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Re: Take Me
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 07:49:19 PM AEST
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| Great write. |
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