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This Part of Me
Contributed by
CuttersAngel
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Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 06:37:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The hate I feel comes out today
As I'm judged for the things I say
**** this life where nothing's right
And **** the ones who seek the light
So much anger behind a wall
So much pain from too many falls
So many scars from a thin razor
That over time has become my savor
My veins have been cut, sometimes too deep
With one quick slice blood begins to seep
But it doesn't stop there, more are to come
I shall still bleed at morning's sun
Cuts so deep that my blood runs free
As I'm condemned to Hell for this part of me.
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CuttersAngel
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2004-01-12 18:37:41]
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Re: This Part of Me
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 07:58:13 PM AEST
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So many scars from a thin razor
That over time has become my savor
Those two lines really hit me I loved the whole poem and nothing I can say can do it justice.
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Re: This Part of Me
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 10:06:10 PM AEST
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**** this life where nothing's right
And **** the ones who seek the light
Amen to that! LOL. Awesome write, I loved it!!
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