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In the garden
Contributed by
lonesomerose
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Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 06:33:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Summer time always a treat
enjoyable gardens that smelled so sweet.
Pleasant to my eyes they greet
an aray of colors sway in a summer breeze.
Alot of work and great care
she took hours long to prepare
the most beautiful flowers I had even seen
now since shes gone a bit of me is pining.
Longing for a walk through the garden
to bask with flowers under the sun
butterflies, birds and bee's are humming
she loves them one and all.
I miss those wild yellow roses
that were her granddads favorite prize
that she held in such high regard
they danced in light breezes with pride.
I wish I had her talent
a green thumb like she has
I always was amased with beauty
that only she could surpass.
Rocky ground grew flowers
unfertile soil grew grand cucumbers
then at last I realized
everything grew because of her great love.
Michelle I miss you and your beautiful gardens
I drove past there a couple days ago and the place looks sick pale and ugly.It has withered
away into nothing. If only I could smell one of your beautiful roses.Love ya Shelby!!!!
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Re: In the garden
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by Necromant on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 06:50:07 PM AEST
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Gosh what a bitter/sweet poem. It's wonderfully written. Very descriptive, I could even picture it. The love for this person really shows, so sad to hear she's not here anymore. Beautiful poem! Keep on writing! ;)
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Re: In the garden
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 01:56:44 AM AEST
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come for a visit this summer and Ill show you a new world of gardening only the desert can bring.Yes I have roses here as well they are beautiful.Thanks for the sweet memory of my grandfathers favorite yellow rose and how beautifully I grew them seems like long ago.
I dont miss the old place back home nor the memories it brings but when i think of my gardens there it makes my heart sing.Thankyou!!A part of me does miss my acres of gardens one of the few joys I had durning that time.Thats why they were so beautiful because I put my entire life into them.
I love you to!!
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