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Sinful Dance
Contributed by
Necromant
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Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 05:53:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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On a warm winter night,
He saw her dancing under the moonlight,
In her sensual movements he saw,
Not even a single flaw,
A flaring desire crept trough his body, consuming,
Her delicate scent in the air, whispered in his ear… lust blooming
-------------------------ooo----------------------------
A mysterious, handsome man, caught her sight,
As she was swaying with the music of the night,
A symphony of seduction played in her mind,
Craving for him to watch her from behind,
She danced with a frenzied pace,
Turning, capturing his hungering face
-------------------------ooo----------------------------
Souls merged with mutual attraction,
Their bodies’ united, escalating tension,
Pleasure surpassing their wildest fantasy,
Rocking as they reached their climax, pure ecstasy,
With their hearts, promises where made,
……They’ll always keep their love resonate
Copyright ©
Necromant
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2004-01-12 17:53:06]
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Re: Sinful Dance
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by Kie on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 06:13:31 PM AEST
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This surpasses everything I have read of yours. It is simply flawless. I commend you.
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Re: Sinful Dance
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 06:40:18 PM AEST
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| This is a good write, written with much passion. |
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Re: Sinful Dance
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by SkYYBLu on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 06:52:24 PM AEST
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| FLAWLESS! |
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Re: Sinful Dance
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by mystERA on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 04:41:42 PM AEST
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i REally like this!! i must agree that this is one of your best!
And you know what? you are getting better at this :D
this poem sounds so mature...absolutely fantastic!
cheers and smiles
ellie |
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Re: Sinful Dance
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by jeanie on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 05:16:17 PM AEST
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in fact I prefer your dark style ;)
jeanie |
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Re: Sinful Dance
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by whisper-of-night on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 08:07:39 PM AEST
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it is interesting to include both the man and girl's views in one poem, kinda Love at First Sight stuff going on here, and its nice to see you write something happy for a change, hehe, your mood ARE improving! It is good!
~Whisper~ |
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Re: Sinful Dance
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 02:57:34 PM AEST
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| Very very nice. Yup. Very very nice.... Yup.... |
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Re: Sinful Dance
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by ShadowDaughter on
Monday, 29th March 2004 @ 02:25:13 PM AEST
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Ooooooooh, I like! Impressive. And oh-so-pretty sounding ;-).
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