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Homeless
Contributed by
sugar0986
on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 04:42:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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He sits alone,
covered in dirt.
Begging for help,
as people walk by like he's not even there.
He replied back to the ones who did notice.
I had dreams once too,
but lost them in a flash.
I was once like you,
thought I new it all,
thought I was on my way to sucess,
but everything went wrong fast,
before I could stop it.
But the people just stared and laughed.
But inspite of all the nasty comments,
he just answered back as gentle as can be,
and said, you judge me now,
but on day you will be judge too,
and said a pray for the ones who judge.
Copyright ©
sugar0986
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2004-01-12 16:42:25]
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Re: Homeless
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by Putteragain on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 04:52:27 PM AEST
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it is nice to see others notice too
thank you i dont feel so alone
homelessness is a tragedy and it shouldnt have to be
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Re: Homeless
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by Necromant on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 06:00:43 PM AEST
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This poem is great, they way you describe the man is amazing and it radiates emotion. Good writing! Keep on writing!
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Re: Homeless
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by shelby on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 06:09:48 PM AEST
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this is so sad and a terrible reality today
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