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I'm Not A Poet
Contributed by
jeanie
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Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 03:14:16 PM in AEST
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I'm Not A Poet
I sit in my room
Alone like I am all days
Your picture is in my head
I'm by my comp
Keyboard is the only thing I can touch
But not you
Not your hand
Not your face
Not your lips
Your picture is like Mona Lisa
Your eyes follow me everywhere I go
Leonardo was a poet among painters
I am one of millions
Despite that I ask my love of you
And I ask you to ask your love of me
Love is a negative and the distance develops it
All the time I try not to think of my sorrow
I'm getting drunken with a roll
I'm weak
You're my drug that keeps me sane
I know you are stronger
So I put my trust in you
And for one thousand three hundred and fifty-sixth time I repeat to myself:
"Dulcis in fundo"
Copyright ©
jeanie
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2004-01-12 15:14:16]
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Re: I'm Not A Poet
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by Putteragain on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 03:18:34 PM AEST
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its different i liked it
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Re: I'm Not A Poet
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by Kie on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 05:36:40 PM AEST
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Jeanie-
You are a poet. If you can write from somewhere deep within you than it exists. The more you write the more comfortable you will become. Have faith in yourself, you're doing great.
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Re: I'm Not A Poet
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 01:21:52 PM AEST
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This one was actually good. Err I mean in comparison to the last one you just posted. I don't want you to take that the wrong way. I just like this one way more. These lines for sure got me
'I'm weak
You're my drug that keeps me sane
I know you are stronger
So I put my trust in you '
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Re: I'm Not A Poet
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by jeanie on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 04:49:37 PM AEST
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Thanks for all comments :D:D
To Cobalt : don¨t worry, I'm super okay with you telling me your opinion, I appreciate it and I like to hear what you think, thanks :)
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Re: I'm Not A Poet
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by dAWn on
Thursday, 1st April 2004 @ 09:21:41 AM AEST
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distance is like river without a bridge. You can and at the same time, you cannot cross it....
Ok, this was a lame coment, but I think this will be my favourite (on the toppic of 'distance' of course ;P) |
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