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Shhh...
Contributed by
ravenrain
on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 02:01:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
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A room is just a room
to you and them.
But to me its my savior
my hole away from life.
At times even that
isn't quiet enough.
Where is it that I do hide
for all that threatens me?
Glance quickly and you might see
a motion on to whick
seems like a rock'in chair.
Look harder then see
a damp face with tears.
Quiet am I now
footsteps do I hear.
What will it be today?
Copyright ©
ravenrain
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2004-01-12 14:01:18]
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Re: Shhh...
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by Necromant on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 02:05:27 PM AEST
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Oh I hope that its not what i'm thinking! This poem is very sad! Continue writing! Good flow
Anne |
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Re: Shhh...
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by shelby on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 02:19:34 PM AEST
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very sad
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Re: Shhh...
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by Kirby on
Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 10:12:29 PM AEST
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| I feel your pain hun! Great write! I do like hsi one! Keep em coming! Love:::Kirby |
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